Tuesday, 7 February 2012

Fiction Adaptation - Shot breakdowns

     01) EXT. SMALL COUNTRY COTTAGE/SHACK - EVENING
   The air is calm and still, the light is slowly draining from the day. The cottage small and humble sits in the woodland, with a small fire outside the door. Through a fogged window the shape of a person can be seen. The window fogs more and so intensely that it becomes a sheet of white.

- Low angle, wide shot, Pull into focus
Summer house left of the frame; sun setting over the wall on the right.

- Two/three CU
Horse or natural items from outside

- Level with bottom of window, tracking shot  
Slow movement, soft focus as the camera stops looking through the window.


02) EXT. WOODS - NIGHT
   TED a middle aged man walks alone UP a narrow foot trail holding a torch before him. At points he struggles to pull himself through the stillness of the trees on the frost covered ground.

-  High angle, mid shot,
Ted walks through the darkness

- Low angle, CU,
A loose rock slides out under Ted’s foot

- CU,
Ted reaches out grips a tree to steady himself

- High angle, mid shot,
Ted steadies himself

- Low angle, wide shot, pan up to the sky
Ted appears small in amongst the trees the sky is dark with bright stars shining and a full moon (5th and 10th Feb 2012)

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Extra shots for edit

- Straight up through the trees with night sky

- Lots of close ups of dead leaves, frost, wood

- Smooth POV through the trees

- Have Ted walking in background of shots with plants in foreground


03) EXT. ABOVE THE WOODS - NIGHT
   Ted walks calmly and slowly out of the trees, stops, turns and studies the vast dense woodland beneath him.

- Wide shot, 
Ted walks out of the woods

- V Low angle, Mid shot,
Ted stands and looks down at the wood

- OTS, MC/U
Looking at the trees

- V Low angle, CU
Ted stands and looks down at the wood, breath comes out like smoke
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Extra shots for edit

- Feet walking

- Have Ted walking in background of shots with plants in foreground


04) EXT. COUNTRY PATH - EARLY MORNING LOW LIGHT
   Ted continues walking the path of his lonely and solemn journey. Alongside the path that he walks is a field seemingly empty. He walks on stopping abruptly seeing a group of ten horses in a field.

- Mid shot, 
Ted walking and stopping abruptly

- Trombone, CU
Ted’s surprised face

- CU
Rubbing his hands

-CU
Small smile comes across his face
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05) EXT. COUNTRY PATH- EARLY MORNING, LOW LIGHT
   As Ted looks on at the calm, beautiful, nobility of the horses he becomes intensely fascinated.  
He puts out a hand and strokes the nose of one of the horses

- Mid shot,
Behind Ted on left, horses on the right

- CU
Horses

- Mid shot
Ted walks over to the horses

- CU
Ted slowly puts his hand out a strokes the nose of one of the horses


06) INT. SMALL COUNTRY COTTAGE/SHACK - EVENING
   An old man’s hand hangs in the air miming the action of stroking the horse

- CU
Ted slowly puts his hand out a strokes the nose of one of the horses


07) EXT. COUNTRY PATH- EARLY MORNING, LOW LIGHT
   Ted leaves the horses and walks on

- M/CU - tilting from high angle to low angle
Ted turns and walks away


08) EXT. COUNTRY POND - EARLY MORNING, LOW LIGHT
   As the sun begins to rise in the sky Ted halts his journey once again. Looking into the pleasant waters at his refection, only the sound of the waters currents are heard. The reflection of a bird is seen flying over head a small ripple emerges in the water.

- Wide
Ted looks at his reflection in the water

-M/CU OTS
The reflection of a bird is seen flying over head a small ripple emerges in the water.

- CU
Ted looks surprised and worried



09) EXT. COUNTRY SIDE - DAWN
   As the sun quickly brings light the sounds of nature become clear and strong.

- Wide shot of sun rising

- Mix of MS and CU of light hitting natural objects


10) EXT. COUNTRY SIDE - MORNING
   Ted stands alone overlooking the beauty before him he slowly turns. A look of surprise appears on his face as if waking from a bad dream.
-CU
Ted stands and looks increasingly worries

- E/W/S
Ted turns to look at nature

Ted beings to walk again this time however with a sense of urgency.

- MS
Ted quickly walking

- CU
Ted pushes branches out of the way

-CU
Teds face

- MS OTS
Ted tries to run

- E/W/S
Ted running along the hill side


11) EXT. COUNTRY SIDE - MORNING
   Ted quickly walks back past the areas from before now illuminated he tries to run

TED (VO)
Stumbling in the fever dreams, down towards
The dark woods, from the kindling tops,

- MS Low angle - soft focus background
Ted slowing down

- CU
Ted catches his foot on fallen branch

- MS
Ted stumbles and so slows right down

- CU
Ted shakes his head

- MS - Followed by pan up to tree tops
Ted walks on now limping slightly

12) EXT. COUNTRY PATH - MORNING
   Upon seeing the horses once again ted sighs a breath of relief. Realising that it was not a dream, drawing strength from the animals, he once again looks on with amazement.
-WS
Ted walks on now using a tree branch as a walking stick

- M/CU
Ted smiles seeing the horses

- CU OTS
Ted looking at the horses from a distance

- CU
Teds feet walking with the stick

- MS
Ted throws down the stick

-CU
Stick hitting the ground

-CU
Ted putting his hand out to the horses

- CU / MS
Horses


13) INT. SMALL COUNTRY COTTAGE/SHACK - EVENING
   Ted now an older man sits happily in his shack which contains trinkets of horses and elements of country living. 

- MS
Slowly panning from fire to Ted

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