Major Project - Pre Production - Script draft 3 meeting

So this morning I along with "Love Always" writers Dean Ross and Maddie Ireland went in to get feedback from Simon Welsford on draft three of the script. Although I was moving in the right direction Simon took issue with the lack of character and story development of the entire script. However because the writing was clear he was clearly able to understand the visuals I would produce using the script. Because of this he was able to give detailed notes and from those notes we worked together over a few hours and hashed out draft four. As I sit here writing this blog entry Simon is reading over draft 4 and the three of us are waiting for his notes. We can only hope this is more what he had in mind. We shall see...